The Tropical Paradise
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It was a warm, boiling day in the tropical paradise. The clouds were scattered throughout the sky like sprinkles on a tasty doughnut. The atmosphere was tranquil and very quiet. Apart from the birds squawking in the light blue sky, chirps, tweets and other bird noises could also be heard. There were a few clouds roaming around in the sky and were all different shaped.
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A moderate sized island took centre stage in the vast, tropical waters. Trees ,greenery and bushes cloaked most of it. The shore was covered with pure white and possibly peach sand. Also in the front of the beach were a few beach umbrellas. The few umbrellas were in bad condition and looked as if they were torn apart into pieces. In the back row was part of the island. You could barely see people heading into the opening, they were probably wondering what different and enjoyable things they would discover up ahead. The humid and scorching sun made it way too hot to be in. It was beautiful.
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Surrounding the island was masses of vivid, turquoise water. Although, further on near the paradise beach, the water was a dark, deep , blue and a murky green that could be seen but not quite. The platform was a light brown. It was like a bar of chocolate that was delectable. It was all long however it was not that wide. It was thin like an electric plug. Far, far, far looked like what was a cruise ship It was miniature like a nit. You would be able to see it if you had a microscope or a telescope.As a percentage it would be 100% to see it. But if you didn’t have one you would have 0% of seeing the cruise ship.
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The island and this paradise moment had to go on. The scenery was alluring and dazzling. Nothing could stop anyone from having a look at the scene. It would be a dream come true to be in the picture.
Good job Akshara u used a lot of interesting and descriptive words next time include more metaphors
ReplyDeletewell done Akshara! i like how yo paragraphed and the great describing words you used. next time add a couple more similes
ReplyDeleteGreat work Akshara!! I really like how you used your goal and I think you need to maybe work on using more sophisticated vocab.
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